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Monday, February 25, 2013

LITTLE BOY LOST EVALUATION

LITTLE BOY LOST EVALUATION
BY PUBLISHER
 
Words can't express the joy I felt when I opened an email from Lisa C. from Outskirts Press and read her evaluation of our manuscript.


What you have submitted for publication involves a wonderfully planned out plot with excellent characterization. This story was a great read that kept my attention from the first page.
 
You have a terrific writing style. I can tell that you have done much planning and preparation in crafting your work – especially the way you have thought out the characters and movement that happens in the story. This is not an easy feat.
 
Your prose is very nicely written with details that capture the reader. I found myself really connected with your characters and what was going on. It is easy to have too much going on too soon – not in your case.
 
Your plot is slow and methodical and you use your dialogue to move the plot along. Your characters are lifelike and I love it when I leave a story feeling like I know them. You have a realistic plot and to me that makes for an enjoyable story. Characterization is one of the most important elements of any successful story. You did not rush or force anything.
 
Your manuscript is a nicely developed story that really did read like a movie in my mind. I can picture your setting – your characters. You have crafted a quality piece of writing.

Writing Partners
Vada & Joe

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